Tuesday, January 09, 2007

"i love you (and not in a friendly way)"

"i love you (and not in a friendly way)"

rain turns to ice
during the one a.m. stumble
from the hard times bar.
i wish i could
kiss you. i dream
of being barechested in
your arms.
don't make me remember that she's waiting at home.
smile at me
and tell me how smart i am.


Zack said...

love the title of this poem. it says so much. and in so parenthetical a way. love me some parenthesis.

Laura Bjerk said...

Tiffany -
I've found you and am glad --- I think your poems will help inspire me to write my own...a good thing considering I HAVE to for my thesis...!!

I hope you're well!